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Audiobook: Shadow of War, Book 1 & 2

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image of two book covers from Buried Starship: Shadow of War, Book 1 and Relic Fleet: Shadow of War, Book 2

I recently listened to Buried Starship and Relic Fleet from the Shadow of War series by Anthony J. Melchiorri, both narrated by John Pirhalla. I made it through the first book, but the second is going to be a did-not-finish. I enjoy found star ship books, but this series isn't that. The story follows Veteran Marine Jace Hawthorne after humanity fell to the alien Overlords. Now a smuggler, he ends up in hot water. Jace reluctantly joins the resistance and ends up in command of a superweapon left to humanity by another alien race to exact revenge on the Overlords.

I can't seem to find it now, but I saw a review for the book that said "This would be a good story without Jace". To put it bluntly, the main character is dumb. Jace's whole purpose and motivation is to get medicine for his mother and provide for family. This once-in-a-lifetime opportunity comes along in the first few chapters of the book, but turns it down due to his 'rules'. The story just kind of goes down hill from there.

Jace gets infected with a 'microbial key' which means Jace and only Jace can command the super starship that was left behind. This makes no sense. If you are building superweapons to exact revenge on the alien race that wiped you out, why would you lock it behind a key that is next to impossible to find? It doesn't protect the ship from being physically seized and striped for information and technology; which is why they must escape from the Overlords. It just makes it useless to the people the ship is meant to help. Later when we finally get to the 'buried star ship' it burst out of it's tomb and fights off an enemy fleet. Shortly after becomes completely useless due to being damaged and incomplete.

This brings us to the second book where the crew is on a mission to fix the ship so they can be useful again. At one point, they find an automated cargo ship that contains rare materials needed to fix the ship. Jace notices that the ship has an atmosphere and life support running, which is odd for an automated vessel. It is then reviled that, in addition to the rare materials, the ship is also caring alien super soldiers in stasis pods. Instead of doing the logical thing which would be to vent the ship to space and there by eliminating the threat, they just keep going as is, hoping to not wake them. It was at this point I decided to stop listing.

I hate when an MC is dumb just for the plot. I rate these books 2 out of 10 Overlords.

https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/239719039-buried-starship https://www.amazon.com/Buried-Starship-Shadow-War-Book-ebook/dp/B0FL6QH6VY

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/242152218-relic-fleet https://www.amazon.com/Relic-Fleet-Shadow-War-Book-ebook/dp/B0FSYWP5Y7

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